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I use garageband, ableton, FL studio, and massive to make my music. Still have a long ways to go though. If you have any tips on one of these 4 things, don't be afraid to share :) -CK

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A segment/cliffhanger of my fic

Posted by coleknows - September 8th, 2011


Now note about this, this one is going to be a crossover of some of my original characters AND it will be a different perspective. There is a very high chance that i WON'T submit it on the internet. This is just for fun and im shit at editing. Now, proceeding to share a part.

Here is a little backround story to the situation. When i mention something about one of my own characters, i will type it like [this].

[Nas], one of the most trusted members of the [DCF] is trying to pursue something that he THINKS exists. Although he has been denied several times that it does not exist (from [Ron]), he has been hunting for the truth. He recently went into conversation with someone claiming that equestria DOES exist and the dimension was made when MLP: FIM was released on the HUB. [Nas], relying on hopes from that person, disobeys [Rons] orders and uses the dimensional teleporter to try and accese this "equestria"...if it exists. Although [Ron] attempts to stop him, he still manages to escape. He is now in a completely new world and he is unsure if this is the place he was looking for.

In the next scene, he is confronted by a creature. Now here is the cliffhanger part or i wouldn't consider it but more like a geussing game.

"The plants still did not answer his question though. After all, he has similar plants like that in the [D dimension]. Plus, life felt very similar around him. He could not feel any weird and unusual creatures around him...wait, what was that? He heard a noise somewhere in the bushes...and it did not sound friendly. He drew his sword ready to strike at whoever was stalking him."

Try to geuss what is about to attack him. Careful, the answer is not as obvious as you think.


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